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24 October 2009 @ 08:24 pm
Restraining Order - Elma/Lucil (Final Fantasy X)  
Title: Restraining Order
Fandom: Final Fantasy X
Pairing: Lucil/Elma
Prompt: Heat
Rating: R
Words: 100
A/N: I realize I have yet to write an actual, honest-to-gosh drabble in the traditional sense (100 words) for this comm. I decided to push myself. Result:

Lean, firm curves dimpled by old scars: certain marks distinguished a Djose Knight even when out of uniform.

Elma flinched. Hands entangled in her bridle's reins jerked taut.

The riding crop had already painted a pink lattice on blooming skin. The last stripe welled with blood.

Lucil smiled, lips firm and tight. "I brought potions. Continue?"

Nodding, Elma's cheeks reddened as much as those being flogged.

The crop struck with precise, hard slaps, quickening to a gallop.

They rode until both forgot who was driver, who driven. Lucil's voice broke, sobbed.

A heavy silence. Then: "Unbind me, Elma."


Order restored.
sissyhiyahsissyhiyah on October 26th, 2009 01:19 am (UTC)
I swear by all things holy, if you don't someday do what you did here for a Quistis fic, then I'll cause all sorts of shenanigans. Trust me. Turn on BBC or CNN and you'll know it when you see it. I'll be the one dragged away in cuffs screaming, "I begged her to do it, but she wouldn't listen! Begged her, I tells ya!"

This was just...

Well, let's just say that I'm considering riding lessons myself after reading this.
Helluinauronlu on October 26th, 2009 03:03 am (UTC)
Eep. My stalled Quistis/Xu fic is currently more vanilla.

I had a hard time writing D/S, as you can tell even here. But it will probably come out sooner or later!